Tuesday, March 25, 2008

Nikita's outline

Introduction:
a. Most media representatives, who suppose to signify the common people, present that proper cares and help was given to the victims of disasters; however, these media companies forget to demonstrate the truth.
b. Tsunami victims are left behind to rebuild their lost lives, while many media companies show that billions were given to these victims. Yet their houses remain in ruble and smashed pieces.
c. Many newspapers such as New York Times reveal that first there is no warning system, and then it shows that people are living in ruble. Some people still searching for their loved ones. While there no clear evident that aid was given direct to victims, but many videos display that Red Cross and private help was given to victims.

Body:
I: Media display false information and media doesn’t allow public to view the truth.
II: according to The Guardian, many Thailand tsunami‘s victims had to sell their kidneys in order to survive.
III: It clearly stated many government and media companies display that aid was given. There was Red Cross and other form of aid given to the victims. The victims were provided with the necessary supplies such as food, water, shelter, clothing, etc.
IV: What do media gain from by present public with false information? Are media companies involve with large corporation? Are these corporations filling up their pockets with aid money?

Conclusion:
Tsunami victim are not even getting their promised aid. The have deal with all sort of problems. The media forget to show reality that many victims are still suffering and they have sell their organs in order survive. Above of all there is no indicating whether victim received any warning. Even though tsunami was unpreventable, media companies try to convince the public that all necessary help was given to the victims. People are left to die, while larger corporation officials and government fill their pockets.

1 comment:

S Henkle said...

The structure seems fine, but a large part of a project like this (in fact a large part of most academic writing) is finding/assembling the evidence for the points you want to make in the body of your essay. Be very aware that that work isn't done yet here, and so will need to be done before the draft is due Wednesday.