Old Thesis- Due to the numerous unavoided deaths, a warning signal and safety precautions should be developed and activated in each neighborhood with increasing technology in today's time
New Thesis- Due to the widespread unavoided deaths of many people in the Southeast Asia Tsunami which occured in 2004, there is a reality which shows us that there is a lack of preparations done to cope with any natural diasters. With our technology booming in today's time, each local community or neighborhood should be provided with warnings and information of such incidents beforehand to escape the clutches of death and evacuate to a safer area. The community should establish safety precautions in case such unfortunate events do take place.
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I still think you'll be better off pushing this away from the particulars of the event and toward something that might apply to all events--you may have becomes overly attached to this idea (it happens all the time), and may need to think about it differently
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