Tuesday, March 18, 2008

Jessica's New Improved Thesis

Developed countries such as the U.S. holds a position for a much needed added support for under-developed nations to keep them on track in today's technology world and to prevent the unnecessary loss of lives. Sources of media shed light on this issue as under-established countries are left vulernable to nature's fury that comes in the form of natural diasters, an example being, The New York Times, which states "A tsunami warning system that could have saved thousands of lives in Southeast Asia is being encouraged by the United Nations. The technology to detect earthquakes under the sea and predict their consequences already exists in the Pacific and must now be extended to the Indian Ocean." In my view, who can be held accountable for such situations except well-established countries themselves. Progressed countries don't provide enough support as they should as funding is not all that matters. I believe that different sources of media encourage important matters to be handled that forces countires to help and respond to the criticisms they face.

1 comment:

S Henkle said...

While I feel like your thesis is getting more ornate and more complex, it still seems to essentially argue that there should be warning systems. Is that the way you see it, or do you feel that this says something more? If so, let's talk about it and we can work out a way to get that language onto the page.