Tuesday, March 18, 2008

Nikita's New improved thesis

Most media representatives, who suppose to signify the common people, present that proper cares and help was given to the victims of disasters; however, these media companies forget to demonstrate the truth. For example the 2004 tsunami of Southeast Asia, the media showed that people were offered aid; nevertheless many people still are struggling to rebuild their ruin homes and lives.

1 comment:

S Henkle said...

I think what we talked about in class was more interesting--this sounds quite a bit like your last thesis, though perhaps that's a matter of wording. We need to reword it so that it would be clear to a reader that the essay would be about media representation--at present, perhaps because it ends on the idea of struggle, one gets the idea that 'rebuilding' will be the subject.