reposting thesis statements
According to Guardian, there were hierachy among students in U.S high schools. Even at schools located in small and calm town like littleton exists hierachy. Both of gunmen,klebold and Harris, revealed their anger and hatred ,caused by being treated badly and looked down on by classmates on their diary. Whether this anger was approprite or not, it proved that wrong relationship like hierachy between students can affect people to commit a irregistible crime.
Therefore, I want to point out the problems which make people neglet the hierachy exist and want to write how U.S schools should be for students who are minority and have difficulties following class to find their goals in their school lifes.
1 comment:
Still seems a bit general, no? I'm concerned with phrases like 'the problems which make people neglect (that) the hierarcy exists.' This is too broad, I think--there are potentially an unlimited number of problems. But the topic is good. Let's discuss Wednesday.
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