Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Arielle Shimko
Tuesday, April 29, 2008
Golda Markowitz- Topic
2)My research will be coming from scholarly journals and articles that discuss what types of organizations the government uses, how these organizations were formed, and what they each contribute. In addition it may include discussing when the government must respond and when it does not, and also what sort of preparations the organizations need for when the unexpected occurs.
3)Through this research, I will become acquainted with the structure and function of these various organizations and I will be able to explain how each contributes to the government’s response to a disaster. The research will tell how the government coordinates the response of these various organizations to maximize the overall response to that particular disaster.
Magdalena's topic
1Aushwitz -Birkenau
2Majdanek Camp
3.Pruszkow-Camp
4.Sobibor-Camp
5.Tremblinka-Camp
April is the month of Uprising in concentration camps in Poland. During spring break I got interested in Polish Jews history. I found out that many of my favorite poets were of Jewish background. I found out that Jewish people were welcomed by our kings and they got their rights in the middle ages. They could build as many synagogues as they wished in Poland. The Jewish People reffered to Poland as''The Polish paradise''. In 13 England kicked the Jewish people out and later the other European countries kicked them out, so they came to Poland which was nice to them. By the beggining of WW2 Poland had over 4 million Jews. I was doing a research about Polish politicans and half of them are of jewish background and the former president too. It seems like a lot of people are of Jewish background. When i was vieving concentration camps I found out who the comendants were of those camps. A lot of them were not typical Germans but Swedish, Danish. Some of them didn't have the typical ''Aryan'' face. A lot of them looked like normal people who would't hurt anyone. I found out yhat Hitler was one quarter Jewish but he hid the documents . Europe was so mixed then that we could believe that.
zhi yang: research paper
Why the school violence keeps repeating itself in history over the past decades? From the vaguest memory columbine massacre to the latest Virginia attack, the accident is getting much bloodier and terrible. Compared to other developed countries England, Japan, France, or developing countries china, India, American has a high rate of school violence. Why there are so many merciless teenager killers? That can attribute to the American culture. Teenagers’’ believes, thoughts, behaviors are shaped by the American culture. In contrast to other counties, American culture is more aggressive, such as America invades other countries. The culture is strongly associated with the economic. America is the only one super power in the world. The generation of teenager is affected by that idea. They act like they are the center of the world and do something incredible.
then i will expore some measurement needed to take to prevent further school violence.
COLTON HELLER- NEW TOPIC
2) I will be looking for research to answer these questions as further explanations of the stateda thesis. I will be using Jstor and Project Muse, along with the library and internet sources. I am very curious to find the answers for these questions and understand they all take place.
3) The research found on mafia lifestyles will help me get a better understanding to answer the questions in my topic of research. This will help prove my point in depth and give me an answer to these questions.
Paper Topic
Monday, April 28, 2008
Elizabeth John
Elizabeth John
Elizabeth John
Sunday, April 27, 2008
NO CLASS MONDAY
Melissa's Research Paper
2) This paper will be proven by using scholarly articles such as psychologist reports, journals and other scientific research/experiment. These articles will illustrate how people react to different situations and try to understand why they behave in this way.
3) The research will help prove why people constantly blame others when a tragic event occurs.
Nikita- Research topic
2. Mostly I am going be using guardian, New York Times, New York Post, etc to first see how newspapers influence people way of thinking. Then I want look into research done on racial discrimination and I want look into court case regarding racial discrimination .I want to define the word race, discrimination for that I want look at different dictionary and encyclopedia. Also I want to consider interview with victims of racial discrimination and look at solution to prevent such tragic from happening.
3. The essay proves why people discriminate against one another and how we can solve this problem. The big question how we can stop bad human habits, if we can’t stop then lessens these problems. After I want look into many researches and scholarly articles to get bigger idea to stop this problem. How the media benefits from all this?
Insia Saleh - Topic for new research paper
2. I will be looking for all the scholarly journals and articles from newspapers to prove my topic. I will specifically look for "Academic Search Premier", "JSTOR", and "Project Muse" for proving from different scholar point of view that newspapers get biased. I will also look for "Lexis-Nexis" to show some evidence from different newspapers that they are in fact biased and "Opposing Viewpoints Resource Center, Gale" in order to show different viewpoints from websites, magazines, journals and articles to help prove my topic of public influence.
3. My research will help prove my point in the way that newspapers were biased in the past decades with reporting about the past wars and elections and also that they are still biased. The research will show that newspapers in the past were biased and as such influenced public perceptions about the related issue and then I would show that how newspaper reporting largely affected on public minds. At last I would prove that the same technique is used in the present also to influence people.
Saturday, April 26, 2008
Jessica- Research Topic
2. Most of my research will consist of articles form scholarly sources such as the National Geographic and the encyclopedia which will confirm and expand on the topic’s point. The research I use will provide damages occurring in places such as the forest or ponds where wild-life co-exists with problems that are widely known whereas effects of Global Warming on humans is openly revealed and concern is shown for. The extinction of animals will be pointed out and the articles will show how Global Warming helps with the extinction of the animal breed.
3. The research will help prove my point as it can provide ample amount of facts and quotes from each article while helps prove and built on the claim that not only humans are harmed by Global Warming but animals are also badly affected and not untouched from the disastrous Global Warming.
Friday, April 25, 2008
Rena Adler- Topic
2) Mainly, I will be looking for prior research conducted by psychologists to prove the suggested point. Investigations carried out by political scientists and sociologists will also help to further broaden the topic so it can be viewed under a different light.
3) My essay will prove and go through the many different reasons as to why one would project their own thoughts into what they read. Therefore, as I have not conducted necessary experimentation, previously conducted research will be of utmost importance.
Monday, April 21, 2008
For Class on Monday April 28
Your first task, then, is to determine a topic or, more specifically, adjust your topic from your last paper into something substantially more complex (this may end up something more like a new topic). A good way to start: If you had to write a 20 page paper on your particular topic, what would need to change, how would the topic need to be adjusted? Generally, this might mean adding an historical element--an argument about Bhutto's death, for example, might not just deal with contemporary accounts in the NYPostho but give a ten page historical overview of reporting on assassinations over a given period of time. I will ask you to explain how that historical survey would help an argument, so keep that in mind (in the given example, perhaps it will be that the historical survey shows that the current obsessions with how Bhutto died are not new obsessions).
It is critical that you do this with some sense of what's available. Spend time looking through the databases, specifically Project Muse and Jstor, typing in your search terms, narrowing those terms, and seeing what's out there on these topics. If you have any technical difficulties, let me know immediately, rather than coming to class and saying: 'I couldn't log on.'
But in the end this is mostly about thinking, and spending time thinking. Ask yourself about the course of your thinking over the term--what are the questions about what you've been studying which it would take a library to answer?
Your assignment for th 28th, then, is to post the following here:
1) the topic for your new 'paper'
2) a one paragraph explanation of what kind of research you will be looking for.
3) a sentence or two explaining how the research will help prove your point.
Thursday, April 10, 2008
4.10.08
Using the OWL Purdue MLA Formatting Styleguide found to the right, go through and familiarize yourself with the various possible formats one needs for various situation (web citation, books with no author, books with three authors, etc). You'll never have to memorize it, but it's good to get a general idea.
Then, do the exercise found to the right (Works Cited Exercise). Open the document and create a finished works cited page from those random, unformatted entries (which means, in addition to formatting each entry, alphabetizing, etc). Use the OWL Purdue MLA Formatting Styleguide to find the answers to how to format each entry.
You can either reformat the exercise itself, create a new word document, or paste the final works cited page into an email (which will change the format, but we'll let that pass). Once you have done this, send the finished product to me.
Monday, April 7, 2008
4.07.08
As mentioned , there is no class on Wednesday, April 9th. I will, however, be in my office by around ten fifteen if you want to meet with me. You should have gotten your essay back from me by email tonight (let me know immediately if you haven't and don't know why). I'd be happy to discuss the second draft then.
Remember that this is a draft. Therefore the grades are, in almost every case, going to be significantly lower than you or I might like.
I won’t comment this extensively on your other drafts. In this case, however, this is not the final grade. It is a temporary grade, given until you turn in a second draft of this essay by email, 3 pm on April 18th. If I do not get a new draft on that date, this grade will become permanent. If you have not turned in a first draft, you cannot turn a draft on the 18th, as the lateness penalty will have made it impossible to receive a passing grade on the paper. In fact this impossibility occurs just over a week after the original due date, this Saturday (and of course, that's only if it were a nearly perfect paper).
Email me with any questions, though often a face to face meeting is best for discussing essays. I should be in my office by 10:15 tomorrow.
Wednesday, April 2, 2008
4.02.08
As promised in the syllabus, missing the peer review causes difficulties. Those who did not attend class today or who attended but did not bring a paper will need to have a classmate (anyone willing) do a peer review of your paper before receiving comments from me. While you are in the process of getting this done, you should still turn your draft in on time, on Friday.
The peer review form is available to the right. Feel free to email the form back and forth, and have your peer reviewer type the comments directly on the document, etc. Once you have gotten a classmate to do this for you, email the document with the comments to me. Until I see at least one completed peer review on your paper, I will not comment on your draft.
Getting the comments of classmates and friends is a critical part of the writing process--your social network will be available to you as a writer long after our time together has finished.
Tuesday, April 1, 2008
Colton Heller- First Paragraph (draft)
Colton Heller- Outline Prompt
a) How the mafis isn't all that it appears to be by movies, books, and newspapers.
b) The mafia gets portrayed as people with money, respect, and an untouchable, invincible attitude. However, this is only in the movies, because in the real world they waste money, become a figure of fear, and get arrested. People think they can observe through movies and stories about mobsters, and they form an image of them, but in reality the image is very different.
c) Through examples of movies (Bronx Tale, Goodfellas, Donny Brosco, Sopranos, and Once Upon a Time in America). Examples through newspapers (New York Times, New York Post), and through books (The Good Rat).
II) Body- Proof that the mobsters dont live the lifestyle one sees in movies and books.
i. evidence from movies
ii. evidence from books
iii. evidence from newspapers
III) Conclusion
a) Repeat thesis in different words and add closing details
b) In conclusion, if someone only watches movies and hears stories, they will look at mobsters in a much different way than they appear after realizing the illusion of the mafia. These are just average men who have chose to live a different way, but in the end it turns out to become the wrong way of living.